PATHETIC - TRIAL 1

[starmods]

[you're in a fancy sitting room, gathered around a round table]

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[moonlit_knight]

[Poems.....]

Should this not be how it's spoken,
we apologise for our mistake.
But still we pray for a token,
a gift to ease our ache.

Should you find it in your heart,
for 100 coins to part,
our gratitude would overflow,
for such an auspicious start.

[dontdeadopeninside]

[oohhhhh]

[moonlit_knight]

I won't claim to be the best poet, but maybe they'll like it?

[dontdeadopeninside]

I liked it.

[moonlit_knight]

Thanks Khonsu.

[mhnkjleyx]

The Nameless Poet of Nameless Poems sponsors you 100 coins and anticipates your further literary development.

[moonlit_knight]

My most heartfelt gratitude,
for the wealth that you've imbued.

[mhnkjleyx]

The Nameless Poet of Nameless Poems suggests working in use of imagery and metaphor.

[moonlit_knight]

[Thinking for a moment...]

I'll pour my blood and sweat and tears,
and all I have to offer,
to paint an oral masterpiece,
if that's what fills the coffer.

If all the worlds a stage,
and to be players is our lot,
then sit and watch with bated breath,
as we spin a worthy plot.

[mhnkjleyx]

The Nameless Poet of Nameless Poems salutes your continued effort.